Wow Zeno, it is great to see you so engaged during poetry writing. You are a clever writer. I enjoyed your similes and the way you have played with the syllables to get this Tanka poem just right. I wonder if you could choose a title to add to this poem - perhaps something about the seasons.
Wow Zeno, it is great to see you so engaged during poetry writing. You are a clever writer. I enjoyed your similes and the way you have played with the syllables to get this Tanka poem just right. I wonder if you could choose a title to add to this poem - perhaps something about the seasons.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeletecool and nice work
Delete